Testem Benevolentiae Nostrae: An improved translation

I have lately improved the translation of Testem Benevolentiae Nostrae that I made a few years ago. I am seriously considering trying to make a volume of translations of many of Leo’s encyclicals, since for many of them no lucid English translation seems to exist. Leo XIII is, of course, a key figure in the Thomistic revival, and so I think that this could be a worthwhile project. Thoughts, anyone? Do you like this translation?